Today I would like you to read your writing from yesterday. As you are reading, I would like you to edit your work.
These are the things I want you to you to look for:
1. Capital letters and full stops
3. Are all your tense past tense - 'is' becomes 'was'
4. Can you add further detail?
5. Is it the best that it can be?
When you have completed that, I would like you to collect vocabulary to describe feathers. I would like you to focus on the lenses of sight and touch.
What do feathers look like?
e.g. long, thin, grey etc
How do they feel?
e.g. soft, fluffy etc
When you have your vocabulary keep it safe, you will need this on Thursday. I have added some photos to help.