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Today we will be editing our writing from yesterday. We will be looking for -

  • 'non-negotiables' - these are capital letters, full stops, other punctuation, Yr 1/2 spellings
  • first person pronouns - me, I, we, my
  • have you written through the lenses of hearing, seeing, feeling and action?


Read your sentences as one paragraph - do they flow? Does it 'hook' the reader? Do you need to make some changes to vocabulary or punctuation? If you do, do it. Remember your paragraph must tell the story of the storm: the storm starting, you (Weevil) being in danger and the bird saving your life. 


When you have done this publish your work, focus on your hand writing. 


I look forward to reading you finished work later. smiley